November 19, 2010

Children part 2

wrapped in our universe

between musical notes

gliding along time

a dance for tea


invisible swords

heroes illusion

pirate evolves

surprise attack


whistle out, whistle in

wide eyed rapture

wanders tip toeing

seeing beyond hours


curled on mother's lap

melody in whispers

gold fish kisses

pink giggling


shattered heap

wet linoleum

beneath small face

teddy stayed behind


hours are days

weeks made backward

sunset sneaks up

bed time too

Writing the first one I mostly watched memories of the girls who circled close, loving Ms Heidi, the after school coordinator who didn't have children of her own yet. I watched my children for ideas, but I didn't write about them. Just before I fell asleep, I knew I wanted to write a part 2, holding only my own boys in that space of quiet meditation between words written. Both poems are important.


Posted by heidi at November 19, 2010 07:30 PM
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